Saturday, December 15, 2007

Character building...Inside out or Outside in?

Who are the characters we read about? They are fictional, but who are they, really?

I've been asked this question many times. It's a natural question to want to ask a writer. I've often wondered about the characters in the novels I've read. How did the author create them? Are they based on anyone in particular? Who? Enquiring minds want to know. :)

One of my favorite authors, Linda Howard, manages to create strong, intelligent characters time and time again. If you can find the time to squeeze in Killing Time, it won't let you down. It was a fast and powerful read the entire way through the book, and the ending is fantastic! No spoilers here. Roxanne St. Claire, another favorite, and personal mentor (Go Rocki!), does a fantastic job too. Her characters are vivid, smart, and sexy. Rocki has won numerous awards for her talent, and I can honestly say she's truly a nice person who has a huge heart. Btw, Rocki also has a new Desire book out this month. Stop by her website and read chapter one. Or pick up Thrill Me To Death for another great read. I loved it! And how about Beverly Barton? How does she come up with those chilling killers? Have you ever seen Beverly's sweet smile, lol. And she really is as sweet as pie in real life too. You'd never, ever guess she could create these characters, but somehow she does, and consistently. Btw, Beverly won the 2006 RWA Award in the best-selling romantic suspense category for Close Enough To Kill, another one of my favorites.

Where do writers find the inspiration to create such vivid characters novel after novel? (Can you tell I like romantic suspense?)

I've talked to a lot of writers over the last few years, and I've heard a variety of different ways that characters are born. Many pick a handsome celebrity and start dreaming. In fact that seems to be one of the most common ways to create a character. Tools, like collages and poster/story boards lend to the creative process. Though I can agree that there are lots of dashing celebrities to choose from, I personally don't use that method simply because it just doesn't work for me.

Although, on a recent visit over to my friends at the Pink Heart Society a couple of weeks ago, I spotted Pierce Brosnan in a post and found it quite ironic that he was one of the men chosen to grace the page in the Weekend Winddown post, Who Can Resist An Irish Boy.

The reason I found it ironic is because just a couple of weeks prior to spotting PB at the Pink Heart blog, I'd realized that someone I'd seen when I was out and about looks a bit like him, only more handsome...(Sorry, Pierce.) It's in the twinkle in the eyes, but the overall look and aura was even more powerful. Yes, really.

So, what is it that makes a man sexy? The classic handsome? The rough boy handsome? Incidentally, the Weekend Winddown post for today over at the Pink Heart Society is Tall, Dark, and Just A Little Dangerous. for anyone who likes that particular look. It's all in good fun.

What inspires you as a writer? Everyone is different. I'm referring to the process of getting started with your character, of course. We all realize that eventually, superficial qualities just don't cut it alone, but when you begin to build a character, where do you start? Does physical beauty trigger your imagination first? Or do you need to start with the inner beauty?

My brain travels on a slightly different road from the photos and celebs, but what works for one doesn't necessarily work for another. I can recognize that there are some definite beautiful people out there, both men and women, but I have a hard time starting from there.

For me, the elements that make a man extremely sexy start with that sparkle of intelligence and wit in the eyes of a handsome man that lights him from within. That grabs me first, and then it's a myriad of traits that get my attention after that--and keep it.

There's also that rare chemistry with someone that lets you know deep in your soul that things could be...sensational. (You haven't felt the full power of chemistry until you've felt the PURE ZAP brand, lol. Whew!) That's a great start too, but, even then, there's so much more that plays into the big picture. Like integrity, trust, respect, and then there's the ability to become friends as well as lovers--all the things that make a relationship truly worth having and holding onto over time.

What inspires me to create my characters? Well, it's all the things that I've just mentioned. The very things I would want in a relationship. Because I build from the inside out, I don't think I've ever used a photo of anyone, celebrity or otherwise, but I can certainly see the aesthetic beauty in some of those photos. Also, so far, I've never used any one person in particular for inspiration in a character I create (Though I reserve the right to change my technique in the future...), but rather, I've compiled traits from a pool of qualities.

I add all the personality traits for the foundation of who the person is, and then move along as he/she grows. Regarding the H, I get a good sense of who he is going to be in my story this way. I do this with the heroine too, but the h is often a bit easier for me to define. I think it's probably normal to feel more comfortable creating the same fictional gender.

So, I usually have a pretty good idea of who I want the H to be as a whole person, and I can make a fairly decent sketch of who he is by entrusting him with various qualities I believe an honorable H should have, but sometimes, as writers know, the characters talk to us, making strong statements about who they are from the very beginning, and if that happens, I listen carefully. In fact, I love it when that happens because the H comes out much stronger and well defined at the end of the process.

Once I have a good feel for who the H is as a person, I begin to give him physical characteristics. This is harder for me than creating the inside for some reason. I can never decide what he should look like. For me, whether the H has flowing black tresses, brown wavy curls, red locks, a blond mop , or a beautiful head of white hair, doesn't really matter as much as who he shines through as being from the inside out; however, I do try my best to give him qualities a girl can appreciate *wink*.

But, for both the H/h, I think it's more about how they perceive each other that makes them (and their relationship) come alive for the reader. If the chemistry is there between them, it should all be good to go, and I guess for me, though there is definitely a superficial physical element that plays a role, for the most part, that chemistry comes from within when they make a connection on a deeper level--even if it's in just a glance--by recognizing some deeper element within each other. Almost like one soul speaking to another. It's a beautiful thing that just happens naturally. Whether it's that one of them, or both of them are able to see some quality deeper within the other from the start, or whether it's after they get to know each other, it's still some deeper pull, at least for me. For others, I realize it's different. That's why I'm curious about this.

Also, as I've heard so many female readers say, they like to identify with the h by not having her too perfect. Likewise, I usually feel comfortable with not having all of my H's be muscle bound hunks with perfect teeth, but let's face it, if the h and H are truly falling in love, aren't they going to perceive each other as desirable? That's what's really important. That the reader feels the chemistry between them, and knows that, in the eyes of the H and h, there is no other person who attracts them as much as their partner. I believe that's also what allows the reader to invest his/her heart in the story.

I build characters from the inside out.

My question is: How do you build characters? From the outside in, or the inside out? Where do you begin?

There's no right or wrong way to build, just different strokes for different folks, and I'm curious, so come on...don't be shy. Let me know what works for you.

Btw, I dropped my very last assignment in my professor's mail box yesterday afternoon. I'm officially on winter break, yay!

Also, remember the road trip I mentioned regarding my daughter's cats? Turns out the person in the Navy who was to notify the Japanese government that they would be arriving...never did.

That means I have to wait forty days, then go through the veterinary health certifications, reservations, and travel plans all over again, and hope that the temperature isn't too cold to fly them at the end of January or the beginning of February. Grrrr.

On the up side, the cats (Belle and Andi) are extremely sweet and no trouble at all to have here.

Have a wonderful day, and don't forget to share your answers on character building.

Lee
:)

PS
I finally found the other Christmas song I love by Vince Vance and the Valiants: Christmas Just Ain't Christmas Without You. I included it over on MySpace music bar. Feel free to stop by and enjoy the new tune.

And, of course, something just for fun... I got elfed with my children! This is me with Jesse, Allen, and Rachel doing a little Christmas jig. Come on and dance with us, lol!
http://www.elfyourself.com/?id=1439093731

10 comments:

Roxanne St. Claire said...

Lee! Thanks for the props on my characters and the wonderful blog on character building. I love your concept of building from the inside out. I wish I could. I think I do JUST the opposite - I chisel my characters out of stone and work from the outside in. I usually know them in the roughest sense (he's slow and southern, she's fast and pushy; he's impulsive and sarcastic; she's brilliant and careful), and then I start to dig and dig and dig - while I tell the story. Sometimes that's quite easy and other times I get a piece of granite that just won't cooperate and I have to fight, sweat, bring out the industrial-strength tools and rewrite A LOT. It's never easy...but that's why it's fun!

Thanks so much for putting me in the same blog entry with a few of my writing idols. You're a doll!

xoxo
Rocki

Lee Morrison said...

Hi Rocki!

Thanks so much for the comment! It's great to hear how you go about building your characters. It may sometimes seem like granite to you but, nobody would ever be able to tell you struggled.

By the time I meet your wonderful people, they are polished gems and I've loved them all. :)

As far as being easy, you're right, it's not, but the fun does come with the process of creating, and especially with the end result of satisfaction when you hit the finish line. You helped me to learn that a couple years ago. :) You've been such a wonderful teacher.

Good luck with the new books. I'm praying for much more continued success for you!

Thanks again for taking the time to stop by!

Hugs,
Lee
'big grins'

Bailey Stewart said...

While its true that I use celebrity pictures for my characters, that's where the resemblance ends. I go through a lengthy process with them to make them my own. I use Kate Walker's 12-Point Guide to Writing Romances which contains many exercises to help build your characters. One of my favorites is where the heroine writes a letter to her mother/sister/whoever describing this man that she's met and what it was that attracted her to him. By the time I'm finished "building" my characters the only thing they have in common with the celebrity is looks. I use collages too, full of fashions, cologne/perfume, cars, houses, etc. everything that represents the characters.

Thanks for dropping by my blog. Friday's are when I talk to spam. Why? Because someone has to do it. *gg*

Lee Morrison said...

Hi Bailey,

I love Kate's 12-point guide.

I wish I had an easier time with building the looks for my characters. I seem to know them very well inside, but don't ever have a clue what they'll look like on the outside 'til they're done.

I like your perfume on the collage idea.

Oh my gosh, you guys are so funny with the spam talk. I'll be back to visit you. I love your sense of humor.

Thanks for dropping by!

raine said...

Interesting post, Lee. ;-)

I don't have a clue, lol.
I think usually I start inside-out. I don't generally much care what my characters look like initially, and have sometimes gotten to the end of a book, only to go back and change my earlier descriptions.

And the heroes usually come in pretty loud and clear. Heroines are always more difficult for me (probably because I want them to go away so I can have the hero all to myself, lol).

Good to hear from you. ;D

Lee Morrison said...

Hi Raine, so good to hear from you, Lady!

I've had to go back and change descriptions too. I hate it when that happens... Sounds like we're similar there.

LOL, I can relate to wanting the H all to yourself. Too funny. :)

In one of my stories, I became very frustrated with the h because she kept doubting the H was genuinely a great guy, even though I'd worked very hard to help him convince her otherwise. Ha! I was ready to run off with him myself! Sometimes the characters can get stubborn on us.

Thanks for posting!

Anne said...

Hi, Lee!

I'm still learning the craft, as you know, but I tend to jump in and just start writing. I see a scene and just write.

When I start, I have a very vague idea of my H/h, both inside and out. As a situation comes up in the story, they guide me as to what motivates them. Of course, there's a lot of re-writing, and maybe that's why I'm not done with my book! LOL!

For the outside, all I know that he's yummy! :-D

I don't use a movie star as my basis, just because I never know what these celebrities will do to taint them in my mind. I'd hate to wake up to find that my "hero" has been arrested for drunk driving or something. That would just color my whole perception of my character.

My heroine is (hopefully) someone readers can identify with. Physically, she's not perfect, but the cool thing is that he sees her inner beauty and that's where the magic comes in.

Have a wonderful winter break! Relax and enjoy!

Hugs,

Your MissChievous Anne

Lee Morrison said...

Hey Miss Anne! So good to see you!

Oh that would be dreadful to have you H's persona tarnished by a celeb's carelessness, I agree.

As one who's had the privilege to sneak a peek at some of your writing, I have to say your characters are extremely likeable (and yummy,lol)!

I love that the inner beauty is the magic.

As I sit here today struggling with one more unexpected round of edits, I can relate to the re-writing. Grrr.

Nothing like a little blood, sweat, and tears to polish a story, right? :)

Just know this...I'm waiting as patiently as I can for the ending to that wonderful story of yours, and as you pour your heart into yours, I'm right here with you working on mine.

We're in this together, friend. Keep going.

Hugs,
Lee

Bailey Stewart said...

It's spam day. Where are you? *gg*

Lee Morrison said...

Be right over, Bailey. Wouldn't miss it, just been running all day, lol.